The juxtaposition of muck and homework here made me laugh. It must be nearing the end of summer! Thanks for the post.
Clever!
Hi Bridget, I've been on the beach & we spot the fish by the ripples. I love that you call them their sighs, will remember that.
These are delightful -- I feel refreshed after reading them. Wonderful observations . . .
Your post title is all kinds of perfect. (and so are your haiku...I, too, love the home-work!)
Thank you, Sarah, for the comment. Fish do swim in schools after all... =)
Thanks, Catherine! =)
Thanks, Linda! Oh, the beach...we have a trip planned for mid October to visit the beach - long overdue. *sigh* =)
Thank you, Jama! Sometimes pond*ering just happens naturally... =)
Thank you, Mary Lee! Good thing I wasn't looking a creek or I'd have to name my post creek*ing haiku. LOL =)
I love the vision of ripples echoing the fishes' sighs. Lovely! :)
I love the unusual perspective of the underside of the lilies -- I would never have thought of them as umbrellas for the fish!
Thank you, Myra! Makes you wonder what fish have to sigh about. =)
Thanks, Keri! My daughter pointed out that since fish are wet anyway, do they really need an umbrella? hee hee =)
Wonderful haiku– such fresh, eye-opening perspective, Bridget.
Thanks, Michelle! High praise from a haiku creator herself. =)
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The juxtaposition of muck and homework here made me laugh. It must be nearing the end of summer! Thanks for the post.
Clever!
Hi Bridget, I've been on the beach & we spot the fish by the ripples. I love that you call them their sighs, will remember that.
These are delightful -- I feel refreshed after reading them. Wonderful observations . . .
Your post title is all kinds of perfect. (and so are your haiku...I, too, love the home-work!)
Thank you, Sarah, for the comment. Fish do swim in schools after all... =)
Thanks, Catherine! =)
Thanks, Linda! Oh, the beach...we have a trip planned for mid October to visit the beach - long overdue. *sigh* =)
Thank you, Jama! Sometimes pond*ering just happens naturally... =)
Thank you, Mary Lee! Good thing I wasn't looking a creek or I'd have to name my post creek*ing haiku. LOL =)
I love the vision of ripples echoing the fishes' sighs. Lovely! :)
I love the unusual perspective of the underside of the lilies -- I would never have thought of them as umbrellas for the fish!
Thank you, Myra! Makes you wonder what fish have to sigh about. =)
Thanks, Keri! My daughter pointed out that since fish are wet anyway, do they really need an umbrella? hee hee =)
Wonderful haiku– such fresh, eye-opening perspective, Bridget.
Thanks, Michelle! High praise from a haiku creator herself. =)
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