Friday, May 1, 2015

Who Am I? (guest poet)

Today my guest poet is my 11 year old daughter, Maureen. She came up with this poem during my Poem in Your Pocket lesson in her 5th grade class. Thank you, Mo!

Who Am I?
by Maureen Magee-Uhlik

I wear a halo of fiery light,
I am a sweet delight.

You eat me on your special day,
I celebrate your aging way.

I give you great pleasure,
and memories you will treasure.

Who am I?

ǝʞɐɔ ʎɐpɥʇɹıq ɐ

Thank you to Ellen at Space City Scribes for hosting Poetry Friday today!

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4 comments:

  1. Linda BMay 2, 2015 at 1:59 AM

    Aw, very fun, a must share with some of the students, Bridget. I love that 'halo of fiery light".

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    1. Bridget MageeMay 4, 2015 at 10:18 PM

      Thank, Linda, Maureen is quite the poet. I hope your students like the poem. =)

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  2. KeriMay 8, 2015 at 2:11 AM

    I love her word choice. She gives the reader hints so gently. Well done, Maureen!

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    1. Bridget MageeMay 8, 2015 at 6:20 PM

      Thanks, Keri! Maureen has a way with words that is a natural talent. =)

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