Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Emergency Warning System

Behind the bricks
a yippy dog yaps.
Ambulance arrives.

4 comments:

Liz Steinglass said...

I really like the line by line alliteration.

Bridget Magee said...

Wow, Liz, I didn't even notice the alliteration until you pointed it out. (I suppose I shouldn't admit that publicly). Thanks for your keen insights. = )

Tabatha said...

So short, but so much story in it! I'll bet your subconscious noticed the alliteration :-)

Bridget Magee said...

Thanks, Tabatha! Thank goodness for my subconscious! = )

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