Emergency Warning System

Behind the bricks
a yippy dog yaps.
Ambulance arrives.
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4 comments:

  1. Liz SteinglassMay 15, 2014 at 11:36 AM

    I really like the line by line alliteration.

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    1. Bridget MageeMay 15, 2014 at 6:53 PM

      Wow, Liz, I didn't even notice the alliteration until you pointed it out. (I suppose I shouldn't admit that publicly). Thanks for your keen insights. = )

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  2. TabathaMay 17, 2014 at 3:17 AM

    So short, but so much story in it! I'll bet your subconscious noticed the alliteration :-)

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    1. Bridget MageeMay 21, 2014 at 6:52 PM

      Thanks, Tabatha! Thank goodness for my subconscious! = )

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