Thanks, Liz! This was my submission for tinywords...it was rejected hence showing up on my blog. I'm going to try again next time they have an open sub period.
Oof! This is great. Love the emotion and story conveyed in such a small space. I was totally surprised, perfect juxtaposition of small, peppy looking poem and scenario with a cupcake that both ended up being so full of human tragedy and sadness. Clever.
Thank you, Jeannine! I try to pack a punch in as few words as I can - not always successfully (by some editorial standards). I'm working on my craft...every day. = )
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It's like a six word story, Bridget, and powerful. I hope you are okay!
Thanks, Linda! I'm fine...just tapping into what such news would be like.
I'm glad you're fine. You certainly used your imagination effectively. It's a very moving poem.
Thanks, Liz! This was my submission for tinywords...it was rejected hence showing up on my blog. I'm going to try again next time they have an open sub period.
This made me catch my breath. The power of a few words.
Oof! This is great. Love the emotion and story conveyed in such a small space. I was totally surprised, perfect juxtaposition of small, peppy looking poem and scenario with a cupcake that both ended up being so full of human tragedy and sadness. Clever.
Thank you, Jeannine! I try to pack a punch in as few words as I can - not always successfully (by some editorial standards). I'm working on my craft...every day. = )
Thanks so much, Carlie! I appreciate it. I keep working on these tiny poems that have juxtapositions...they are my favorite to write and read. = )
ah, perfect use of so few words. well done
Thanks, Marian. I do like the tiny poems. = )
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