Saturday, February 15, 2014

"Heart" Felt Regret (reposted)

Chalky-bit
Sentiments.
Pastel hued
Compliments.

CALL ME
LOVE ME
KISS ME
HUG ME

Candy hearts -
Read and eaten.
Too much sugar -
Over sweeten.

TRUE LOVE
SWEET PEA
HOT STUFF
CUTIE

Another heart
I can not lick.
Please help me,
I feel sick.

4 comments:

  1. I think you should have shared this at the "end" of yesterday, Bridget. What a laugh. I felt quite tired after reading all those posts! Love that third verse especially!

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    1. Thanks, Linda! Yes, Poetry Friday is both exciting and exhausting...fuels us all up for the rest of the week. Thanks again for hosting. = )

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  2. I love this. It's a perfect conclusion to the sweet sentiments of Valentine's Day. I particularly like the first stanza. It has great rhymes.

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    1. Thanks, Liz! It seems that Valentine's Day is so tied to candy, it seemed apropos to repost this one. = )

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