...once a week poetry treat for the young and the young at heart...
I like both stanzas but I especially like the first one. Everyone can relate to that!
I took your advice, Liz, and edited out the second stanza. It is now a more relate-able poem to all readers. Thanks for the feedback! =)
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I like both stanzas but I especially like the first one. Everyone can relate to that!
I took your advice, Liz, and edited out the second stanza. It is now a more relate-able poem to all readers. Thanks for the feedback! =)
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