Pomegranate Pilferer

stained teeth
scattered seeds
ruby fingertips
caught red handed
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  1. Liz SteinglassOctober 30, 2013 at 1:34 PM

    I love the last line after the very specific description. It works like a haiku I think.

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    1. Bridget MageeOctober 31, 2013 at 2:57 PM

      Thanks, Liz! I couldn't resist the idea of being caught "red handed" with a pomegranate - something I did when I was a kid! =)

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