...once a week poetry treat for the young and the young at heart...
What a sad senryu, Bridget. There are children who will find comfort in this poem.
You really pack a punch in these three lines.
Thanks, Laura. For some reason the smell of burnt toast made me think of divorce.
Thanks, Liz. I think a teddy bear smelling of burnt would pack a punch to a child in this situation. :(
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What a sad senryu, Bridget. There are children who will find comfort in this poem.
You really pack a punch in these three lines.
Thanks, Laura. For some reason the smell of burnt toast made me think of divorce.
Thanks, Liz. I think a teddy bear smelling of burnt would pack a punch to a child in this situation. :(
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