...once a week poetry treat for the young and the young at heart...
Hmmm! Natural white space! Love it!
Thanks, Donna! I hadn't thought of it this way - great insight! =)
Awesome poem Bridget! This will be my silent chant next time I can't fall asleep.
Thanks, Joe! Hopefully you won't experience sleepless nights too often - full moon or not. =)
Brilliant in its simplicity. Love it!
Thank you, Violet! I was going for simple...=)
The space between my dreams...love this little thought that says so much.
Thank you! Sometimes poems come to me in the middle of the night - in the 'white space'. =)
We've been having some lovely moons these past few days, and here is your delightful poem which captures exactly the power they've had over " the space between my dreams".
Thank you, Tara!I know my bedroom has been aglow all night - makes it easier to trek to the bathroom. LOL! =)
Lovely! Would make a great haiga.
Thanks, Tabatha! I tried to just make it simple, but you are right, it does lend it self toward haiga. =)
I was out last night and saw the full moon against the backdrop of the trees - hauntingly beautiful. Your poem captures that feeling. :)
Thank you, Myra! I love the way the moon casts its shadow to create an emotion - 'hauntingly beautiful' indeed. =)
I saw the moon come up last night-always beautiful. I love moon poems, Bridget, & you've captured another aspect of it. Nice and tight!
Thank you, Linda! I love moon poems, too. The moon has a magical quality that is fascinating. =)
There was a three hour space between my dreams last night. I wish I had been able to think about your poem instead of getting crabbier and crabbier that I couldn't fall back to sleep!
Oh no, Mary Lee! I hate it when I lie awake grumpy about being wide awake! Unfortunately I know the feeling too well - hence the poem. Wishing you a restful night sleep tonight. =)
This is beautiful, Bridget. I love the idea of space between dreams...
Thanks, Laura! It was a fun poem to write. =)